Technique: Give voltage to product descriptions.

Writing strong product descriptions is harder than it seems.

Writing strong product descriptions is harder than it seems.

Of course, as Creative director Pat Gallagher once said, "Anyone can state facts about a product, and maybe even state them clearly."

But if your product description is just a boring list of facts, your product will be boring, too. And boring doesn't sell.

A simple, lil process I use for writing a product description that’s rewarding to read:

1. When someone uses my product HOW is it going to make that person feel?

Write down a list of 
positive feelings.

√ Examples: Calm. Refreshed. Rejuvenated. Safe. Daring. Free. Proud. Grateful. Optimistic. Lucky.

2. Imagine your brand as a real person. What’s your brand’s voice? In other words, how does it sound in people's heads?

√ See my client
Hashtag Monday’s voice for example. It’s witty but approachable. It’s direct but helpful. It’s quirky but human. It’s conservational but professional.

3. Write down a list with all the cold, specific, hard, product facts your copy must communicate.

See my client
Anytongs for example. Anytongs is a little magic gadget that turns ordinary spoons and forks into legendary kitchen tongs. Some of its product facts:

√ Dishwasher safe.
√ Durable.
√ Heat resistant.
√ Transforms almost any two pieces of flatware into tongs.

4. Write down a list with common objections that are stopping people from buying your product.

Write them as What if questions like:

-What if they send me cheap crap from Ali Express?

-What if this website isn't legit and I'm just being scammed by some random dude in Russia?

- What if my package gets lost between somewhere and nowhere?

- What if I can get a cheaper alternative somewhere else?

- What if it doesn’t work and do what it says?

Next, follow these 4 steps and start writing your product description. But first you need a good structure. And to illustrate what I mean, here’s a glorious example from
Monster Supplies (I wish I was the copywriter who wrote it):

1. Write a first statement that teases the reader's imagination and gets them to read your second sentence. ⇝  “This distinctive salt is made from tears shed while home schooling.”

2. Your second sentence should promote the benefits of using your product. But don't sell the product, sell the experience.⇝ “With a delicious celery flavour, it’s quite perfect in a Bloody Mary.”

3. Highlight specifics— product facts, special features, stats that back your claims OR show why your product is remarkable. ⇝ “Salt made from Tears combines centuries-old craft with the freshest human tears which are gently boiled, released into shallow crystallisation tanks, then harvested by hand and finally rinsed in brine.

Developed in collaboration with expert tear harvesters Halen M̫on.”

4.  Close with a bang by addressing the #1 objection that's stopping people from buying your product ⇝
DISGRUNTLED NOTICE: Please note that we’ve been mobbed by monsters of all kinds since releasing this unique new salt. Any orders placed after 9AM on Friday 26 February will be dispatched within 7 days as we await our next delivery. Can’t wait that long? Why not sample our new Salt Made From Tears Of Hope.”